Dylan's Marshmellow Monster Story

Dylan's Marshmellow Monster Story

The boy is in a creepy scary forest

it was night time at a dark scout camp

Josh is 10 years old  with dark brown hair tall  and thin wearing yellow scout uniform red scarth.

The monster came The monster had pointy yellow teeth for manching on people with scaly skin. The claws were sharp as a knife the monster has boggly yellow eyes sharp as a hawk.

The monster loved the smell of toasted marshmallows

and gobbled the marshmallows  like a greedy monster

the scout boy Pretended the pillow wass a marshmallows and he gives the monster the pillow

And then boy escapes like the speed of light

the pillow lights up when the monster tris to roast the pillow on the fire

The greedy monster feels sad and lonely

 by dylan

Hamid's 'It nearly all went wrong' story

It nearly all went wrong   

By Hamid

It lunch time and it was a warm sunny hot day
and jeff stood up in the middle of the soccer field
and jeff was on ronaldo's soccer team and
the game had been going on for 30 minutes
and when suddenly jeff saw a ball speeding up
toward his face so jeff managed to dodge the
soccer ball and kicked the soccer ball toward
the goal and scored and won the soccer game.

Tevita's 'It All Went Wrong' Story

It all went wrong?

Writing. By Tevita    

It was a warm, sunny hot day Zaak stood in the middle of the
rugby field. He was on the all blacks team playing rugby against
the Australia team. The all black didn't have a try and they work
hard and finally all black had four point. The all black tried really
hard to get one more try but they didn't get a try. They had six
points but they felt so so happy and they all hugged each other.

And they all high five to each other all the team was still happy.

Harry's 'Sunny Day' Story

One Sunny Day
By Harry

It Sunny Holiday By Harry It was a sunny holiday. TK stood in the middle of the basketball court. He was on the blue team playing basketball against the big snow. The game had been going for 30 minutes. When Tk saw a blue big ball speed up to his blue team. Then his blue team pass the blue ball to TK. Then TK shooting three point. the team cheered for TK. After that TK continue throw in five balls all balls was two points. last TK throw in a three-pointer victory for his team.

Dylan's Next Puppy Adventure from his reading week 10

Dinner’s adventure One fantastic moning I woke up I saw Dinner just stole a block Of gooey chocolate. I put my school t-shirt And my school shorts on and went on my way to school At school i kept thinking about Dinner at writing evin at reading. At home time my mum pick me up jumped in the sports car that dad buyed for mom's birthday last week When I went home mum made me do my chores after that I snuggled with dinner at dinner time i gave dinner my dinner mum didn't notes By Dylan:)

Tekatiti's Next Part of Puppy Story

Pick a story - Think of a name One early morning dinner stole a big fat full chocolate bar from the table and the he ran and ran to his bedroom to hide his chocolate bar and noble on it he was feeling so weasy that he threw up and went to sleep and didn’t wake up in tall the next morning. By Tekatiti

Joshua's Next Part of Story

Dinner’s Adventure By Joshua There is one dog named Dinner. One morning Dinner and Robbie walked in the park. Suddenly Dinner ran to the meat store. He rammed his head into the door and ate the meat. Robbie ran to the meat store to stop Dinner. Meanwhile the meat guy was walking to his meat store to start working. He turned on the lights, he was shocked about seeing half of the meat gone. He went to the back of the counter.He saw Dinner eating his meat, he said “ What are you doing!”. Robbie went inside the meat store, Robbie was shocked too because he saw the meat guy and Robbie said to the meat guy “ Oh no” he knew he was late. The end