Friday, 29 June 2018

Jet By Joshua





Jet has straight hair,green shirt,happy smile and black pants.
His eye color is blue like the sky.
Jet’s breath smells nothing
He is fast as a cheetah.
When you touch him he is quite soft.
He carrys a cellphone and a wallet.
He speaks normal and he says “Hello, my name is Jet’’.


Planning your own poem









1 comment:

  1. Hi there, My name is Abby and I am A year 6 student at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.

    I like the way you expained everything about him even how he speaks.

    This reminds me of the time that my class were making poems.

    Next time you could quickly do a check of it because you wrote "Jet's breath smells nothing" when it needs to be "Jet's breath smells like nothing.

    Kind regards,
    Abby.

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