Friday 29 June 2018

Jet By Joshua





Jet has straight hair,green shirt,happy smile and black pants.
His eye color is blue like the sky.
Jet’s breath smells nothing
He is fast as a cheetah.
When you touch him he is quite soft.
He carrys a cellphone and a wallet.
He speaks normal and he says “Hello, my name is Jet’’.


Planning your own poem









1 comment:

  1. Hi there, My name is Abby and I am A year 6 student at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.

    I like the way you expained everything about him even how he speaks.

    This reminds me of the time that my class were making poems.

    Next time you could quickly do a check of it because you wrote "Jet's breath smells nothing" when it needs to be "Jet's breath smells like nothing.

    Kind regards,
    Abby.

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